I see the waves
Coming from different sides
Travelling so long
To cuddle each other
Then entwine enticingly
And merge together to become one
Then I see us
Coming from different backgrounds
Travelling so long
To meet each other
Then entwine enticingly
And merge together to become one
Oh!
How similar we and waves are
We both travel so far
To find our love
To embrace happiness
To succumb to each other
And for a happily ever after
Then, amazingly
There will be no me; no you
Only us
And our love
Which only multiplies
With each passing years
awesome reading
ReplyDeleteThanks PT :)
DeleteThis is the true essence of love.....
ReplyDeleteIndeed!!
DeleteI am glad that you liked it :)
Awwww this is so beautiful, I immediately thought of my husband =)
ReplyDeleteThats so sweet!
DeleteTo embrace happiness - full of hope and life. Wonderful
ReplyDeleteThanks Alan
DeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteThank you Lisa
DeleteHow lovely, to see the coming together of waves make one ocean. A wonderful metaphor for true love.
ReplyDeleteIndeed it is...
DeleteThank You
What a precious and delightful comparison, lovers and waves. I really like this notion and the way you present it.
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton Kim...
DeleteWell written and wonderfully felt.
ReplyDeleteThank you Scott
DeleteA fine description of love!
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteEven with your last stanza, I still read into sweet poem a positive ideal of "KNOW me, KNOW you.... truly universal!
ReplyDelete"Know me... Know you"..
DeleteThanks for bringing a different perspective
Lovely metaphor for love!(Social) Justice
ReplyDeleteI am having trouble commenting on your site, kiddo. Will try again. It doesnt seem to be publishing it. Everything in the universe is on a path to find the Other, that one or thing that will help make it complete. I enjoyed your poem.
ReplyDeleteYour comment is published Sherry...
DeleteThanks for dropping by and thanks for you gracious comments!
I like this very much.
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
Deletevery sweet!!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Akila :)
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