Somehow, this kind of a feeling should be worked upon..why should one feel insecure...Loving means not expecting one to be the way one want..accepting the person the way the person is...You love..pure and pious..that should be enough..a heart filled with pure love can never feel insecure..
A nice Haiku..and I couldn't help but speak...hope it's taken in good spirit..
I also agree that love means means not expecting one to be the way one want..accepting the person the way the person is... But nobody can deny that every relationship goes through this phase.. Knowingly or unknowingly... And sir.. I believe that the strongest will survive...
Now I am all smiles sir... Because my writing inspired another writer.. And I thank you a lot for your haiku.. It portrays a matured love.. Whereas mine is a more child-like love... :)
Excellent take on the prompt...
ReplyDeletelove it.
Peace
Siggi
Thanks Siggi :)
DeleteSweet senryu. Emotions definitely swing when insecure in love!
ReplyDeleteVery true...
DeleteThanks Maggie :)
What a tender haiku.
ReplyDeleteThanks girl... :)
DeleteSomehow, this kind of a feeling should be worked upon..why should one feel insecure...Loving means not expecting one to be the way one want..accepting the person the way the person is...You love..pure and pious..that should be enough..a heart filled with pure love can never feel insecure..
ReplyDeleteA nice Haiku..and I couldn't help but speak...hope it's taken in good spirit..
Thanks sir... For sharing your thoughts...
DeleteI also agree that love means means not expecting one to be the way one want..accepting the person the way the person is...
But nobody can deny that every relationship goes through this phase.. Knowingly or unknowingly... And sir.. I believe that the strongest will survive...
I don't know yet I am tempted to try my version..yes, you inspired it...
ReplyDeleteIndeed I love you
and I know it from my heart;
strong and secure Me...
RS:)
Now I am all smiles sir...
DeleteBecause my writing inspired another writer..
And I thank you a lot for your haiku..
It portrays a matured love.. Whereas mine is a more child-like love... :)
I can very much relate to this! Great job!
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton Mindlovemisery...
DeleteMy pleasure :)
So sad...
ReplyDeleteIndeed...
DeleteThanks Ann :)
Awwww lovely take!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Juzta :)
DeleteThe moods swinging wildly here!! :) Nicely done!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Nanka :)
DeleteTrue love will always be there, so don't be insecure :-P
ReplyDeleteHopefully!!!
DeleteThanks :)