It's really haunting..Satya...yet I have a view that if someone makes a choice without showing concern for the other person then he/she doesn't deserve even the respect of a memory.. life must move on with greater clarity...and one always meets nobler souls on the way...
Well, perhaps my comments come as a mere thought triggered by the haiku..I appreciate that the gravity can be experienced only by the one who suffers.. You have brought out the feelings of the sufferer quite well... thanks..
A day like that IS dreadful, no doubt about it.
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It's really haunting..Satya...yet I have a view that if someone makes a choice without showing concern for the other person then he/she doesn't deserve even the respect of a memory.. life must move on with greater clarity...and one always meets nobler souls on the way...
ReplyDeleteWell, perhaps my comments come as a mere thought triggered by the haiku..I appreciate that the gravity can be experienced only by the one who suffers.. You have brought out the feelings of the sufferer quite well... thanks..
RS:)
Sir... I certainly agree with what you said...
DeleteBut to make peace with that and move on in life will be dreadful in the beginning...
Thanks sir :)
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Thanks Sumana :)
DeleteHauntingly beautiful emotions here...love them, Satya! Bravo...
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DeleteAlways this dread in a lovers tiff indeed!! How things can change in a snap!!
ReplyDeleteSo true...
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Satya you express emotions wonderfully. A very nice one, as usual.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for your encouraging comments :)
DeleteI can feel the dread and see the image
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DeleteThe longing for that person expressed beautifully!
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DeleteWell expressed!
ReplyDeleteThanks Namrata :)
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