Friday, 13 September 2013

Superstition


The fear of failure
Brims as a superstition
And lives forever
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Thirteen - unlucky
Poor window is unworthy
Sheer superstitions
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Lizard slips on you
Discussion between elders
Is it good or bad?
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16 comments:

  1. Gaurang RaoSeptember 13, 2013 1:06 am

    Failure...always a sad thing. Nice way of writing in both the stanzas.
    Gaurang

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    1. LocomenteSeptember 13, 2013 11:19 am

      Thanks Gaurang :)

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    2. HoteiSeptember 13, 2013 3:35 pm

      :) Loved the lizard one, it combines both superstition and tradition :) fantastic!.

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    3. LocomenteSeptember 13, 2013 3:42 pm

      Thanks a lot :)

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  2. UnknownSeptember 13, 2013 4:30 pm

    There is no end to superstitions in our country. Well written.

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  3. Sumana RoySeptember 13, 2013 4:37 pm


    sometimes superstitions live for ever......very true...well captured...

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    1. LocomenteSeptember 14, 2013 12:27 pm

      Unknowingly
      And we live with it reluctantly...
      Thanks :)

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 13, 2013 8:09 pm

    Nice set

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  5. NankaSeptember 13, 2013 11:22 pm

    The first and last one are brilliantly expressed!! Enjoyed it thoroughly!! Amazing how superstitions are born and you have handled it beautifully!! Hahaha!!

    I was never encouraged to follow any kind of superstition at home and hence never knew about them, till much later in life!! :) This has been a fun prompt day and enjoying them all!! ;) I am amazed by the number of superstitions that exist!! :)

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    1. LocomenteSeptember 14, 2013 12:43 pm

      I was amazed too... There are so many superstitions around us... And loved today's prompt...

      Thanks madam :)

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  6. Amrit SinhaSeptember 14, 2013 1:17 am

    I loved the last one specially ... always so fun :-P

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  7. MadhuSeptember 14, 2013 1:50 pm

    Love the lizard Haiku ;-)

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