Wednesday, 12 March 2014

A Walk with Small Talks!


They walked hand-in-hand. She was enthralled by the serenity and the beauty that surrounded her. She smiled within thanking heavens for bringing him, her love, into her life.

She stole a glance at him and then, she smiled as their eyes met. She felt their shoulders rubbing -against each other.

They sat in the little sit-out, and exchanged sweet nothings.

Suddenly, he slipped a solitaire studded platinum ring into her finger.

She was too shocked to respond. So, she just stared at him and let the tears roll down her cheeks; with a smile in her face.

Then he hugged her and whispered, “Happy wedding anniversary”.

PS: Big-big thanks to Rochelle and all the friends I made from her initiative… Thanks for coming up with wonderful image prompt and thanks for being a constant source of inspiration… Thanks for making my Wednesdays wonderful!!!



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32 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 12, 2014 4:14 pm

    Beautiful! I loved the twist at the end that made it different to the classic proposal story.

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  2. P.S. JoshiMarch 12, 2014 5:38 pm

    Good and romantic story. Well done with a surprise twist at the end.

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  3. AnonymousMarch 12, 2014 6:02 pm

    Aw, that's sweet. Hopefully they'll always be just as much in love.

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  4. AnonymousMarch 12, 2014 6:30 pm

    After reading a few horror-filled stories, I was happy to relax and smile at your story of love, the kind that has endured. Lovely.

    janet

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    1. LocomenteMarch 13, 2014 11:50 am

      Love always spread smiles...
      Thanks Janet :)

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  5. UnknownMarch 12, 2014 6:51 pm

    A lovely story to go with the photo.

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  6. AnonymousMarch 13, 2014 4:10 am

    Nice.

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  7. Dawn Q.March 13, 2014 5:16 am

    What a lovely twist! It's so nice to have a relationship that maintains its magic.

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    1. LocomenteMarch 13, 2014 11:51 am

      Any relation that maintains its magic makes life a celebration...
      Thanks Dawn :)

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  8. AnonymousMarch 13, 2014 6:54 am

    Such a heart-warming story, Satya.

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  9. UnknownMarch 13, 2014 9:02 am

    Best thing I have read all day.
    Loved it!

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  10. Rochelle Wisoff-FieldsMarch 13, 2014 1:42 pm

    Dear Satya,

    Thanks for sharing such a sweet, uplifting story. It makes me wonder how long they've been married, not that it matters. I choose to imagine they've been married a long time and are still very much in love.

    shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. LocomenteMarch 13, 2014 2:07 pm

      Dear Rochelle,

      Initially, I thought of mentioning the number of years too...
      Then I decided to leave it to reader's imagination.

      Thanks a lot for wonderful prompt and comments!

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  11. AnonymousMarch 14, 2014 7:07 pm

    Lovely, especially the nice twist a the end. In the midst of all the horror-type stories this week (mine included) it's so nice to read a genuine love story.
    Well done
    Dee

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  12. UnknownMarch 14, 2014 7:40 pm

    Good story!

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  13. AnonymousMarch 15, 2014 8:28 am

    Good twist to the story. I was headed to the wedding with them!

    Regards

    Jim

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  14. AnonymousMarch 15, 2014 11:16 pm

    I like that this is an anniversary not a proposal.

    Cheers! MG

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  15. AtreyeeMarch 15, 2014 11:31 pm

    This was such a sweet love story :-)Beautiful ,Satya:-) Oh,btw,all my replies to your comments last time were not accepted-got a mail failure msg.Just wanted to thank you for visiting my old blog and for the lovely comments too:-)I don't use that blog anymore but am at Wordpress-the link is http://brewmeacuppa.wordpress.com/

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    1. LocomenteMarch 17, 2014 11:56 am

      Thanks Atreyee...
      Looking forward to read more from you!

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  16. AnonymousMarch 16, 2014 5:14 am

    i really enjoyed this tender and touching moment between this couple - beautiful love being shared. thanks!

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  17. AnonymousMarch 19, 2014 10:28 am

    Great story - and the change at the end - for the anniversary! How nice! Nan

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