Monday, 11 August 2014

Abandoned Me...!

You shattered my dreams
Cut my heart into pieces
And abandoned me!


PS: Thanks Haiku Horizons for the prompt - Cut

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20 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 11, 2014 5:45 pm

    How sad!

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  2. SGAugust 11, 2014 10:03 pm

    Very sorry. But nice haiku.

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  3. UnknownAugust 11, 2014 10:48 pm

    That is sad but a fantastic haiku!!!

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  4. anilkurup59August 12, 2014 8:40 am

    When abandoned it is shattering and ripping the heart. isn't it?

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    1. LocomenteAugust 13, 2014 4:00 pm

      Oh! It is..:(
      But life has to move on, thats the toughest part

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  5. UnknownAugust 12, 2014 10:46 am

    totally heart wrenching.

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  6. Amrit SinhaAugust 13, 2014 12:41 am

    Ooops ... that would be painful :-/

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  7. InsigniaAugust 13, 2014 2:24 pm

    Hope its just for Haiku. Too severe

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    1. LocomenteAugust 13, 2014 4:01 pm

      No worries...
      This is only for the Haiku...
      I pray that nobody experiences this pain!

      Thanks :)

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  8. payal agarwalAugust 13, 2014 9:10 pm

    oh! that's sad! :(

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  9. AnonymousAugust 13, 2014 11:41 pm

    ah ! the pain in your haiku ..! you are too good !

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  10. Dream AngelOctober 28, 2014 4:08 pm

    simple words with much pain

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