Alone
I feel...
Why silence is echoing around...
Where did your laughter vanish?
Those little eyes were my source of light...
Now I am in dark.
My fingers are missing the silk of your hair...
Now those little joys are not anymore...
A tear escapes my eyes. ..
The very eyes that used to drink your charm!
At last I try to sleep...
To catch you in dreams and hug you tight...
But
sleep fails to kiss me...
Where
are you?
To
cuddle me...
To embrace me…
To embrace me…
Let me feel the heaven in your arms...
Let me drift to sleep in the cradle of your chest...
Let me drift to sleep in the cradle of your chest...
Where are you?
Starry night is not beautiful anymore...
Missing those twinkling eyes...
Velvety sky is not enticing anymore...
Missing your tickling think hair...
Oh! I wish I could sleep and see you in dreams....
Where are you?
Alone I feel...
A decent and lovely expression.
ReplyDeleteThanks Anil :)
Deletethings lose their spell and beauty if we cannot share them with those we love anymore... the loneliness is palpable in this...
ReplyDeleteThings becomes meaningless if there is no one to share...Well said...
DeleteThanks Claudia :)
beautiful.. can relate to it at this moment completely!
ReplyDeleteThanks Natasa :)
Deleteyou've nicely created that void and the longing Satya....
ReplyDeleteThanks Sumana :)
DeleteA longing where only in the dreams we can be together.. Very well penned.
ReplyDeleteThanks Bjorn :)
DeleteVivid and heart felt, you words a crafted with the heart
ReplyDeleteThanks Alan :)
DeletePathos plus. The loss of (or lack of) a cuddle is immensely sad.
ReplyDeleteIt is...
DeleteThanks :)
sad! i hate missing people... its feels lonely!! beautifully said!!
ReplyDeleteIt does...
DeleteI also hate to miss people...
Its the worst thing...
Thanks Arushi :)
Missing people (and animals) is the pits.
ReplyDeleteI liked that you mentioned that missing animals can be bad too...
DeleteThanks Sancho :)
You certainly get used to the touch, the scent and warmth of a loved one.
ReplyDeleteYes... Thanks :)
Deletethere is a sadness beyond just being loneliness...perhaps i feel a bit of fear that they dont know where the other is...and they are truly missing....which lacks hope...or threatens the hope they will ever see each other again
ReplyDeleteThat is also a possibility...
DeleteThanks Brian :)
A sad piece... I hope the artist wakes up soon to what is present and waiting for a new love :-)
ReplyDeleteZQ
Aha! That sounds inspiring and motivating...
DeleteThanks :)
I remember that feeling of losing the beauty of the night sky, after love was lost. It does come back though, in time....
ReplyDeleteNights seems to be never ending...
DeleteAnd hope would have died...
True...
Thanks Sherry :)
Your longing is remarkably portrayed in your poem. I smiled as I read it to myself on this sunny day here in Maryland. You've won me over.
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Thanks James...
DeleteI am glad you liked it and that I could make you smile :)
A wonderfully expressed feeling of loss.
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteSo nice melancholia here...I taste it...a romance
ReplyDeleteGlad you did!
DeleteThanks :)
Thanks SG :)
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