Saturday, 23 August 2014

Love-Love Kindda Love

Nothing matters…
Neither the definition of our relationship
Nor what others thinks about us.

What matters is…
Love that still hold us
Together. Forever

Our hearts are connected
And we are trying our best
To retain us. To sustain.

Why would we do that?
If there was no love!
May not be a love-love kind of love

But, we are slaves of love
United by comfort.
So that we always understand the unsaid!


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29 comments:

  1. SGAugust 23, 2014 8:04 am

    Excellent. Always understand the unsaid. That is true love.

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  2. anilkurup59August 23, 2014 8:39 am

    Pretty honest.

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  3. Sumana RoyAugust 24, 2014 5:09 pm

    yeah...no love love kinda love...well said Satya...it's a habit and who wants to miss the comfort of it? :)

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  4. brudbergAugust 24, 2014 5:14 pm

    Love by habit is better than no love at all...

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  5. avalonAugust 24, 2014 5:26 pm

    that last line is the clincher!

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  6. Old EggAugust 24, 2014 5:35 pm

    Being comfortable in love is a blessing.

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  7. Brian MillerAugust 24, 2014 5:48 pm

    love is a lot of work...this is seldom relayed in love stories....
    three are periods of retaining/sustaining...keeping our love
    at the center and not letting other forces pull it apart...

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    1. LocomenteAugust 26, 2014 7:20 pm

      I think third stage is the toughest. That's why we get to see so many heart aches and breaks....

      Thanks Brian :)

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  8. MaryAugust 24, 2014 5:50 pm

    Everyone has to define what they expect love to be for them. Understanding the unsaid is definitely a quality of love.

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  9. ZQAugust 24, 2014 8:06 pm

    Interesting take on love. Well written.
    ZQ

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  10. Gen Giggles August 24, 2014 9:15 pm

    I enjoy love poems. This was very good.

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  11. SusanAugust 24, 2014 10:18 pm

    "So that we always understand the unsaid!" Yes! There is this aspect to love that lasts. I was stopped for a minute by your use of the word "slave" here which has a horrible connotation in my life unlike "habit" or even "addiction."

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    1. LocomenteAugust 26, 2014 7:25 pm

      Thanks Susan...
      Glad that it turned out to b relatable

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  12. UnknownAugust 24, 2014 11:51 pm

    we are indeed "slaves of love" ! so beautifully said... ill make my husband read this :)

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  13. J.N.T.August 25, 2014 1:50 am

    "slaves of love" of course, love conquers all and it can elevate you or tear you down...thanks for the lovely poem Lococmente!

    Jamztoma
    Jamztoma.blogspot.com

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  14. SanchoAugust 25, 2014 1:52 pm

    The ultimate test.

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  15. GabriellaAugust 30, 2014 8:51 am

    What others think certainly should not define a relationship, except if we want everything to go wrong. And you ended your poem with a great closing line.

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