Friday, 28 November 2014

High-Octane

A singer whose voice sounded strained
Endured the pain and entertained
Crowds cheered and danced to his tune
He hoped that the show would end soon
As he struggled to ensure that high-octane is maintained


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20 comments:

  1. Brian MillerNovember 28, 2014 1:46 am

    hard when you are the show
    always feeling the need to outdoor yourself
    to keep them adoring you.

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    1. LocomenteNovember 28, 2014 10:58 am

      Very true... It is really tough to maintain the energy...
      Thanks Brian :)

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  2. Ordinary Indian WomanNovember 28, 2014 3:07 am

    When the singer was told,
    that his octaves were no longer bold
    alas he felt too old,
    and the tickets - lesser were they sold!

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    1. LocomenteNovember 28, 2014 11:00 am

      Wow! That's cool..
      Rhymes so nicely...
      Thanks!!! :)

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  3. KParthasarathiNovember 28, 2014 6:15 am

    Painful the struggle must have been
    As he tried manfully to keep it unseen
    With the happy audience loudly cheering
    While the kitty was fast filling with day's offering

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    1. LocomenteNovember 28, 2014 11:01 am

      Sir... The rhyming is awesome!!!
      Thank you :)

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  4. Rajesh BabuNovember 28, 2014 6:54 am

    great stuff.

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  5. UnknownNovember 28, 2014 8:53 am

    Nice one...!!

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  6. Amrit SinhaNovember 28, 2014 9:54 am

    Poignant ... loved it :-)

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  7. LocomenteNovember 28, 2014 11:03 am

    Thank you SG :)

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  8. deepsNovember 28, 2014 12:39 pm

    thats a High-Octane stuff :D

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  9. HardiNovember 28, 2014 3:10 pm

    This is really good :)

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  10. anilkurup59November 28, 2014 3:26 pm

    spell-bound with these lines.

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  11. Ankita November 28, 2014 4:18 pm

    that a nice limerick..the show must go on!!

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