From dawn to
dusk, I think about you.
At night, I
dream about you.
I look around
and I see you.
I close my
eyes and I feel you.
My heartbeats
chant your name;
And my
thoughts always reach you.
No matter
what you feel
Regardless of
what others say,
My love
remains unchanged
And it will
remain so
Forever and
ever!
Satya - you must be a true romantic at heart to pen such deep and thoughtful lines. Who ever is the receiver of such unrequited love - God bless them!
ReplyDeleteAwww... thanks a lot :)
DeleteSorry I typed in unrequited instead of unrestrained.
DeleteThinking aloud - The poem can also mean u requited love... Because it could also mean that the love will remain regardless of reciprocation... That was the perspective I gained from your earlier comment... "Unrestrained" makes me to look at poem differently...
DeleteThanks for the thoughts :)
A beautiful poem.There was a fleeting thought when I saw the word 'chant' whether the poem could have a spiritual connotation.
ReplyDeleteThink about it,the poem fits admirably to the idea.
After reading your comments, I reread my poem... I realised that it simply talks about love... so could fit into any form of it in its purest form...
DeleteThanks for the perspective sir :)
Beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks SG :)
DeleteVery appealing poem
ReplyDeleteThanks madam :)
Delete"My heartbeats chant your name."...the line reminds me of devotional songs...beautifully done Satya :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sumana :)
DeleteUntil Mrs N finds out and then all hell will break out.
ReplyDelete:)
Delete"My heartbeats chant your name" ah yes, I know this feeling!
ReplyDelete"And my thoughts always reach you." Oh to know that! This line makes the entire poem unique, calm, self-assured, so I believe that the love itself will not change whatever changes life brings.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Susan :)
DeleteAmen :D
ReplyDelete:)
Deletedon't think much of what others will say... as you long as you know the beatings of heart.. then so be it. the poem has a spiritual undertone too. perfect for this sunday read.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :)
DeleteLove is an enchanting bond...
ReplyDeleteSo true :)
DeleteSometimes a person just knows a love will last forever. This is what your poem expressed to me!
ReplyDeleteSometimes, yes...
DeleteThanks Mary :)
It is not always easy to write about love as so many poets have done so before us. You did very well. "My heartbeats chant your name" - I too really like this line.
ReplyDeleteThanks Gabriella :)
DeleteI especially like "my thoughts always reach you." That is a deep connection.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sherry :)
DeleteSatya what a classical expression of love, really enjoyed this determined passion
ReplyDeletehave a nice Sunday
much love...
Thanks a lot Gillena...
DeleteHave a great week ahead :)
What a beautiful outburst of emotions ! Absolutely romantic...
ReplyDeleteThanks Maniparna :)
DeleteThis could be good after all to keep loving after loss, or very bad, because your mind is what you lost.
ReplyDeleteThat's a very scary perspective... If that has really happened, then, its really sad...
DeleteThanks sir :)
A hymn to constancy - I can relate to that and the rewards are deep... With Best wishes Scott www.scotthastie.com
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :)
DeleteMy heartbeats chant your name.....what a beautiful melody to the lucky recipient of that romantic phrase!
ReplyDeleteSizeless unconditional love....Great for your soul! x
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
Deletea very suitable title you've given your poem here. I think you quite a romantic person Locomente. keep us posted on your romance. Very admirable.
ReplyDeleteI think I am learning to romance words...
DeleteA magnificent way to reach anyone's heart and connect to their soul...
Thanks for your encouraging comments James :)
Who would not wish for a friend, partner or lover that was not constant and true.
ReplyDelete:)
DeleteA great heartfelt poem and so realistic! ;) <3
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :)
DeleteWhen it comes to love posts, you are the best :-)
ReplyDeleteComing from you... I am honored !!!
DeleteSimple and heart-felt. Beautifully penned. :)
ReplyDeletePure & beautiful...
ReplyDeleteJz loved it...!!!
Thank you :)
DeleteFantastic love poem. It is what I feel for my wife and I'm glad that you get to experience such a strong bond as well.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot..
Deletebut this is just an imagination...
deep form of love Satya.Nice.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rudra :)
DeleteAt times glorious and others painful.
ReplyDeleteRomantic feelings abound...
Thanks Moonie :)
DeleteA truly beautiful poem....'My heartbeats chant your name'....my favorite line
ReplyDeleteThanks Donna :)
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