Sunday, 14 December 2014

Drifting away from you

Yes, I am leaving
Sometimes love is not enough
It needs so much more!

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46 comments:

  1. A Cuban In LondonDecember 14, 2014 2:23 am

    Good luck! Quite right, too. :-)

    Greetings from London.

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  2. SGDecember 14, 2014 10:50 am

    Beautiful haiku. Whoever let's you leave is the most unlucky person.

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  3. UnknownDecember 14, 2014 12:11 pm

    Yeah, it's quite true...

    Love alone is not enough!!

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  4. Vandana SharmaDecember 14, 2014 1:15 pm

    straight forward said....................!!!!

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  5. brudbergDecember 14, 2014 1:21 pm

    Sometimes it simply doesn't work out..

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  6. Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)December 14, 2014 1:31 pm

    "Love is not enough" ... a powerful haiku

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  7. Old EggDecember 14, 2014 3:07 pm

    Love is far more complicated that love alone!

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  8. Magical Mystical TeacherDecember 14, 2014 5:46 pm

    There's a mighty sadness in this mighty brief poem!

    A Tiny Whirlwind

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  9. DonnaDecember 14, 2014 5:58 pm

    hits you right in the heart center...perfect!

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  10. totomaiDecember 14, 2014 6:30 pm

    honesty is very much needed in a relationship...
    you've been very honest with this haiku :-)

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  11. ZQDecember 14, 2014 6:55 pm

    Interesting thought... but no matter how hard I try I can't find anything/any reason other then selfishness, to abandon Love... unless of course there wasn't any "love".
    Your Haiku served its purpose and was thought provoking. Thanks.
    ZQ

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    1. LocomenteDecember 15, 2014 5:52 pm

      Selfishness is a big enough reason to abandon love...
      Thanks a lot :)

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  12. MaryDecember 14, 2014 7:17 pm

    Love has many facets....but it is also a two-way street. If it is one-sided, it can be painful... Always nice to see you,Locomente!

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  13. GabriellaDecember 14, 2014 8:22 pm

    You are right, Locomente. I'd say love is a prerequisite on which two individuals will build but it is definitely not enough by itself.

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  14. Sherry Blue SkyDecember 14, 2014 10:33 pm

    You have said so much in a few lines. Yes, it takes more than love.

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  15. Pooja MahimkarDecember 14, 2014 10:38 pm

    sometimes that is the right thing to do

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  16. Gillena CoxDecember 15, 2014 2:36 am

    Best Wishes Satyr

    have a joyous Sunday

    much love...

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  17. Gen Giggles December 15, 2014 2:41 am

    Reciprocation is always a good thing. Combine that with trust, then it might work.

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  18. anilkurup59December 15, 2014 11:04 am

    Understanding, empathy is different from just love,aren't they?

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    1. LocomenteDecember 15, 2014 5:55 pm

      They very much are... But, they are important if love has to last.
      Thanks Anil :)

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  19. rudraprayagaDecember 15, 2014 2:39 pm

    Empty stomach won't go after love. Meaningful haiku.

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    1. LocomenteDecember 15, 2014 5:55 pm

      Well said...
      Thanks for the perspective Rudra :)

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  20. Rupasi December 15, 2014 6:33 pm

    "Love" is not just simple hearts its much much more than that!!!

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  21. Anita SabatDecember 16, 2014 11:57 pm

    Leave if you must, but if the love is true, you'll be back for more :)
    Nice one :)

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  22. Amrit SinhaDecember 17, 2014 12:00 am

    Unfortunately so :-(

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  23. humbirdDecember 19, 2014 8:15 am

    Depends what you consider under LOVE....the souls have to be willing to work at 'togetherness' stuff.

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