Sunday, 7 December 2014

Wonderland

Walking hand in hand
Molding the steps in wet sand
Ah! In wonderland


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42 comments:

  1. Ankita December 07, 2014 12:06 am

    that is really nice!! I loved the second line the most :)

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  2. J.N.T.December 07, 2014 8:52 am

    walking on an island wonderland...said this while singing winter wonderland's tune. i said island cause you mentioned sand instead of snow. nice poem!!!

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  3. Vandana SharmaDecember 07, 2014 2:14 pm

    And filling the heart with love and delight!

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  4. KParthasarathiDecember 07, 2014 2:16 pm

    Magic in three lines and it lends itself to different interpretations!!

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  5. totomaiDecember 07, 2014 2:37 pm

    anywhere will be a wonderland if you are with someone walking hand in hand :-)
    lovely write

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  6. NatašekDecember 07, 2014 3:10 pm

    lovely image

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  7. DonnaDecember 07, 2014 5:08 pm

    I too was enveloped in a wonderful image of my feet in the sand and being in wonderland....

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  8. humbirdDecember 07, 2014 6:25 pm

    nice to meet steps of life together with someone close to you... x

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  9. MaryDecember 07, 2014 6:31 pm

    Oh, I just love molding footprints in wet sand....I've done this already and then looked back and taken a photo. A cool reminder of the path one walked! (literally and figuratively)

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  10. GabriellaDecember 07, 2014 7:15 pm

    I too love the second line and how it can be read on different levels! Wishing you many more such beach walks.

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  11. brudbergDecember 07, 2014 7:29 pm

    A wonderland.. at this time of year I just wish for warm socks...

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  12. Red HandedDecember 07, 2014 9:25 pm

    Reminds me of the sandy beach and the time I had in Varkala!

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  13. Sherry Blue SkyDecember 07, 2014 10:00 pm

    Beautifully done!

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  14. SusanDecember 08, 2014 1:49 am

    Beying able to create together is wonderland indeed.

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  15. HardiDecember 08, 2014 3:58 am

    Lovely! :)

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  16. Myrna R.December 08, 2014 7:41 am

    Wonderland indeed. What could be better than to leave imprints in the sand with your loved one.

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  17. C.C.December 08, 2014 8:07 am

    This is a lovely description of one of life's greatest pleasures :-)

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  18. deepsDecember 08, 2014 9:18 am

    then enjoy every moment of it

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  19. Dream AngelDecember 08, 2014 9:58 am

    wonderful wonderland ;) very nice

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  20. Gillena CoxDecember 09, 2014 5:35 am

    there is a lovely freedom in this haiku, the walking, the imprinting, the exhilaration of breathing in the salty air

    have a nice week

    much love...

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  21. gautami tripathyDecember 12, 2014 10:14 pm

    loved the middle line...

    soulfully I stare at nothing

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  22. Jennifer WagnerDecember 13, 2014 1:13 am

    Sounds like wonderland, indeed!

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