Monday, 23 February 2015

Older & Wiser?!!

With loved ones around
Fun and happiness surround
I am astound!

I am astound!
I am a year older.
If not wiser!

PS: Thanks to Haiku Horizons for the prompt – BirthdayJ


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19 comments:

  1. Sunshine-struckFebruary 23, 2015 1:51 pm

    Haha, I think the last line is a tipping point for everyone, I have written a similar haiku. :D

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  2. SGFebruary 23, 2015 6:23 pm

    You are not a year older. You are just a year better.

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 23, 2015 6:30 pm

    I like that!

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  4. anilkurup59February 24, 2015 11:45 am

    Hmm the problem with human beings is that wisdom does not go hand in hand with age. Whilst wine matures with age.

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  5. AliceFebruary 24, 2015 11:03 pm

    I'm still waiter for wiser while the years pile on. ;-) Funny set of haiku.


    https://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2015/02/24/then-you-appeared/

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  6. Sindhu Devi KFebruary 25, 2015 8:17 pm

    Wonderful Haikus! It reveals that you are wise :) There is a saying in Kannada that means knowledgeable people won't express that they are knowledgeable :)

    TC! Keep smiling :)

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  7. UnknownFebruary 26, 2015 2:20 am

    Love when loved ones gather to celebrate birthdays! Nice haiku!

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  8. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2015 5:55 am

    Nice haiku. :-)

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  9. LocomenteFebruary 26, 2015 11:12 am

    Thanks!

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  10. payal agarwalMarch 01, 2015 6:17 pm

    It's always a kind of celebration when loved ones are around. :)

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