Sunday, 15 March 2015

Inspiration

In your memories…
Nights become elongated;
Sunshine becomes solace.
Priceless memories they are!
Ignites unforgotten love – always.
Rose-like charm they have
Adorned with beauty and thorns.
Tears roll down my cheeks, sometimes
I wipe them off and write about you.
On and on. Over and over.
Nestled in your memories, I live. Breathe.

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59 comments:

  1. SGMarch 15, 2015 12:24 am

    Superb

    Awesome

    Talented

    Yare

    Artistic

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  2. KParthasarathiMarch 15, 2015 4:07 am

    A lovely acrostic indeed

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  3. ^.^March 15, 2015 4:16 am

    This so beautiful ... I am crying ... well, I'm always crying ... but ... ya ... thank you ... smiles :)

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  4. Ankita March 15, 2015 11:00 am

    That is such a nice acrostic! Loved it :)

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  5. Sumana RoyMarch 15, 2015 1:50 pm

    a wonderful acrostic...

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  6. kelvin s.m.March 15, 2015 2:33 pm

    Lovely! I have enjoyed reading your acrostics with lines fitting together to your chosen word, inspiration. Thanks for the poem.

    - ksm

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  7. Jae RoseMarch 15, 2015 3:14 pm

    W
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    D
    E
    R
    F
    U
    L!

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  8. Old EggMarch 15, 2015 3:34 pm

    Even when all is lost, memories remain to sustain us.

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    1. LocomenteMarch 20, 2015 11:05 am

      They always do... Like the oxygen that keeps us alive!

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  9. PoppyMarch 15, 2015 5:04 pm

    Even lost love can be found in the depths of one's heart, the passion in its pounding voice, inspiring one to breathe more easily.

    An intriguing acrostic of amour!

    Poppy

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  10. Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)March 15, 2015 5:15 pm

    How refreshing and lovely. Delightful poem and loved the form today.

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  11. MaryMarch 15, 2015 5:19 pm

    Lovely poem; and I enjoyed its finale at the end: "Nestled in your memories I live: Breathe."

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  12. WolfsrosebudMarch 15, 2015 6:06 pm

    memories... a nice thing, but living so much better... moving on

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  13. Vandana SharmaMarch 15, 2015 6:20 pm

    An inspiration to inspire...............love!!

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  14. Pooja MahimkarMarch 15, 2015 7:03 pm

    very nicely written

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  15. scotthastiepoetMarch 15, 2015 7:17 pm

    This quite an achievement - beautifully lyrical, despite the strictures of acrosticness!! With Best Wishes Scott www.scotthastie.com

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    1. LocomenteMarch 20, 2015 11:07 am

      Thanks a lot Scott...
      I am very glad that you liked it

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  16. brudbergMarch 15, 2015 9:25 pm

    Acrostics can sometimes feel a little forced.. this is just lovely though

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  17. Sherry Blue SkyMarch 15, 2015 11:44 pm

    Oh, so poignant! And the closing lines just hit the heart. "Nestled in your memories, I live. Breathe." Beautiful.

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  18. ZQMarch 16, 2015 12:21 am

    Cool
    ZQ

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  19. DonnaMarch 16, 2015 3:00 am

    Oh what soulful emotions and memories here....beautifully presented.

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  20. totomaiMarch 16, 2015 4:10 am

    I liked its simplicity. it speaks a lot too. Ah even a whisper can be heard loudly when you are in love

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    1. LocomenteMarch 20, 2015 11:09 am

      Thanks a lot...
      I am so happy that you liked it

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  21. hyperCRYPTICalMarch 16, 2015 4:12 am

    Very cool!
    Anna :o]

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  22. Myrna R.March 16, 2015 4:32 am

    I like this so much. The words flow so easily and I love the last line.

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    1. LocomenteMarch 20, 2015 11:10 am

      Thanks Mynra...
      I am glad that you liked it :)

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  23. kaykualaMarch 16, 2015 7:18 am

    The acrostic is such an inspiration. It takes a lot of thinking to create one! So touching Locomente!

    Hank

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  24. MaryMarch 16, 2015 5:46 pm

    Hope you will be making visits this week....thanks.

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    1. LocomenteMarch 20, 2015 11:11 am

      I have visited... Apologies for being so irregular...
      But thanks for your support, love and understanding...!

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  25. AnonymousMarch 16, 2015 11:12 pm

    Its so true!!! Happens with me all the time!
    I loved it :)
    These tears have their own magic!

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  26. Sindhu Devi KMarch 16, 2015 11:16 pm

    Oh! It is superb! And the compliment you received by SG too, it is apt for you :)

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  27. UnknownMarch 17, 2015 11:00 am

    Beautifully done!! :)

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  28. AnonymousMarch 17, 2015 8:46 pm

    Really, really like that closing line,

    Elizabeth

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