Sunday, 8 March 2015

My Heart...

M
y heart melts for you
When I hear your voice.

M
y heart obliges to you
When you ask me to stay

M
y heart surrenders to you
When you pour unconditional love

M
y heart, crazy-crazy heart
Does all this and beyond because it loves you!
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49 comments:

  1. Ankita March 08, 2015 12:56 am

    Mmmm! lovely! :)

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  2. ^.^March 08, 2015 4:22 am

    Oh ya ... this is true ...no doubt ... smiles ... Love, cat.

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  3. SGMarch 08, 2015 7:04 am

    Super.

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  4. SGMarch 08, 2015 12:11 pm

    His reply.

    My heart longs for you, my soul die's for you, my eyes cry for you, my empty arms reach out for you.

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  5. AnonymousMarch 08, 2015 12:26 pm

    In Love <3<3<3

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  6. Rosemary Nissen-WadeMarch 08, 2015 2:25 pm

    Ah, romance! (Smile.) Nice use of repetition.

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  7. Vandana SharmaMarch 08, 2015 2:36 pm

    such innocent and pure love!!

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  8. Old EggMarch 08, 2015 2:59 pm

    How important emotions are to both fulfill ourselves and those we love.

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  9. Jae RoseMarch 08, 2015 3:43 pm

    Poor heart...waiting waiting...i hope it is fulfilled...in time ;)

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  10. brudbergMarch 08, 2015 5:17 pm

    There is something special and magical with M...

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  11. Marcoantonio Arellano (Nene)March 08, 2015 5:31 pm

    nice love chant

    Mi aMigo

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  12. MaryMarch 08, 2015 5:57 pm

    Ah, your poem shows the wonder of love. I like your form too.

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  13. totomaiMarch 08, 2015 6:37 pm

    a submissive heart.
    pure love

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  14. Pooja MahimkarMarch 08, 2015 6:43 pm

    and My Heart loves this poem :)

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  15. UnknownMarch 08, 2015 11:10 pm

    Mmmmmm!!!Unconditional Mmmmm :)

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  16. Jannie FunsterMarch 08, 2015 11:15 pm

    Sounds like a beautiful love! The heart indeed follows its own heart.

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  17. Magical Mystical TeacherMarch 08, 2015 11:51 pm

    My, my, my! :)

    Whirling in Baja California

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  18. Sherry Blue SkyMarch 08, 2015 11:56 pm

    I love the progression, of the poem across the page, and of love across the landscape of the heart.

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  19. ClaudiaMarch 09, 2015 12:31 am

    nice... there's not so much unconditional love out there any more... and i def. think our heart responds to it with all that we are...

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  20. TruedessaMarch 09, 2015 2:12 am

    My that heart is full of many signs of love. A nice presentation of the poem.

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  21. DonnaMarch 09, 2015 2:15 am

    A beautiful love poem....so important that unconditional love.

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  22. humbirdMarch 09, 2015 2:58 am

    ...and me too. Love :)x

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  23. SusanMarch 09, 2015 4:01 am

    Sweet!

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  24. IndraniMarch 10, 2015 7:25 pm

    Truly sweeeet lines. :)

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  25. ManiparnaMarch 12, 2015 3:43 am

    Beautiful lines... loved it :-)

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  26. Sindhu Devi KMarch 14, 2015 9:29 pm

    Wow! Beautiful lines and I like the step-like flow of emphasising MMMM :)

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