I was sleeping;
Breathing rhythmically.
Then, I felt your kiss;
In the nape of my neck.
I smiled and turned to face you;
Your starry eyes fixed on mine.
Lips slightly parted;
Saying the unsaid.
You drew me closer
And whispered in my ears -
“This is the last time;
I shall never come again”
I shuddered and looked around.
There was no one.
Then, I opened my eyes;
It was a dream within the dream, I realized.
I looked around again –
There was no one.
“Are you gone forever?” I asked within.
Silence was the answer.
A mere dream or reflection of reality, I
wondered.
Lovely ...god bless u with many romantic dreams 😘
ReplyDeleteThanks Shilpa :)
DeleteIt is just a dream! Be happy always, Loco mente!
ReplyDeleteSure. Thanks Sandhya :)
Deleteouch...even dreams make our heart stop sometimes...happy new year Satya...
ReplyDeleteTrue...
DeleteHappy New Year to you too Sumana :)
Its only a DREAM...
ReplyDeleteBikram's
Thats the only saving grace maybe :)
DeleteOne tends to remember good dreams and hopes it'll become a reality
ReplyDeleteHank
But nightmares also scares!
DeleteReminded me of the song by the Cranberries "Dreaming my Dreams"
ReplyDeleteThis is a poignant piece.
Happy New Year
Ah! I didnt know about this song... will check it out :)
DeleteSuch a sensuous and poignant piece. Love the spark your words create :)
ReplyDeleteWishing you a prosperous new year :D
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Thanks a lot Sanaa... So glad that you liked it :)
DeleteWhat an amazing dream! I really liked the way you wrote this, as it made me question reality a bit....and wondered if it reflected the dreamer's life...or not! Happy New Year to you. Good to see you at the Pantry.
ReplyDeleteCould be!
DeleteOh, this is unexpected.....the "I shall never come again" and the waking to find oneself alone. Dream or portent? One wonders. Very well written!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sherry!
DeleteSad dreams of being left forever. Nice poem though.
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year!
Thanks Myrna :)
DeleteRomantic, tender and nuanced. A lovely write!
ReplyDeleteLoving the lines and the question at the end.
ReplyDeleteThanks Anil :)
Deletedreams are amazing :)
ReplyDeleteIndeed!
DeleteDreams are just the fiction our mind cooks most of the times. Lovely poem and blog :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Fatima :)
DeleteMay your dreams be true always.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rudra :)
DeleteOuch! That hurts, if it ain't a reality!
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