நீ இருந்தால்;
யாரில்லையேனும் குறையில்லை.
நீ இல்லையேல்;
யாரிருந்தும்
பயனில்லை.
பயனில்லை.
Translation
When
you are with me;
It
doesn’t matter if there is no one around.
If
not;
Presence
of others would not ever matter.
PS: I have tried to make a good translation.
I am sure that the essence is captured. But the beautiful wordplay is amiss I
guess.
Rhyming is there in Tamil! It cannot come in translation! Very nice!
ReplyDeleteTranslation is really tough :(
DeleteBeautiful poem. After reading this, I also got an inspiration to write something like yours. But I can only come up with this.
ReplyDeleteநீ இருந்தால்
கடன் வாங்க தடையில்லை
நீ இல்லையேல்
கடன் கொடுக்க
ஆளில்லை
Hahaha... I liked it :P
DeleteLovely poem! I wish if I knew Tamil!
ReplyDelete