Monday 2 April 2012

Deserted


I feel deserted and cursed
My life loses its sheen and colors
Without seeing your mesmerising smile!!!

As a part of Haiku Challenge

5 comments:

  1. You are going to get over this storm! :)

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  2. Is feeling deserted better than actually being deserted? :)

    Deserted Branches

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  3. I think this is the first time I visit your blog ... and I am glad I did. This is a wonderful blog.
    I love the haiku you have written.

    Namaste

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  4. Hey dear...great to see you participating in haiku challenge...Your expressions are very good...But check out syllable count...
    It should be in 5-7-5 or 3-5-3 format :)

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  5. Thanks all... Am elated that you liked...

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