Content is great ~ may I suggest ~ form for haiku is 5-7 - 5 ~ 3 lines and 17 syllables ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
I will surely work on it.. Thanks... keep reading
Keep practicing ... by the end of the month it will feel more natural.Use 3 lines with either 3 syllables in the first followed by 5, then 3.OR 3 lines with syllable form of 5 for the first, then 7 followed by 5.This is my Day 3 ~~ Harbor.
But many asking to follow 5-7-5... I am confused. And decided to stick to that... And thanks...