Friday 6 April 2012

Hope

I know I may fail
Yet I hope to be strong enough
Work hard; seize success

As a part of Haiku Challenge

10 comments:

  1. It's well expressed but perhaps for a haiku too many syllables..you may like to recheck the last line..

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  2. Its updated... I did not knw that non-alphabets will also be counted

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  3. I enjoyed this haiku of yours. My favorite lines is "befriend success" I, too, would like to do that.

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  4. content is excellent ~ wonder about haiku form ~

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  5. Hey... I think this is 5-7-5 form...

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  6. Befriend success, is a great message. Here's hoing it works for you!

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  7. Beautiful lines dear...:)

    But check out syllable count...

    To know how many syllables a word has goto thefreedictionary.com

    you can search for word and check the syllables...

    For example ...enough has two syllables e-nough harder has two syllables hard-er

    Don't count the whole word as a one syllable...Hope this information helps you :)

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  8. عش كل لحظة كأنها آخر لحظة في حياتك،عش بالإيمان،عش بالكفاح،عش بالحب،عش بالأمل،وقدر قيمة الحياة
    Live every moment like the last moment in your life
    Live by Faith
    Live by Struggle
    Live by Love
    Live by Hope
    Estimated value of life

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