It's well expressed but perhaps for a haiku too many syllables..you may like to recheck the last line..
Its updated... I did not knw that non-alphabets will also be counted
very inspiring :)
I enjoyed this haiku of yours. My favorite lines is "befriend success" I, too, would like to do that.
content is excellent ~ wonder about haiku form ~
Hey... I think this is 5-7-5 form...
Befriend success, is a great message. Here's hoing it works for you!
Beautiful lines dear...:)But check out syllable count...To know how many syllables a word has goto thefreedictionary.comyou can search for word and check the syllables...For example ...enough has two syllables e-nough harder has two syllables hard-erDon't count the whole word as a one syllable...Hope this information helps you :)
Oh, darn! Can't I have hope without working harder?Tell Me, Sister Crow
عش كل لحظة كأنها آخر لحظة في حياتك،عش بالإيمان،عش بالكفاح،عش بالحب،عش بالأمل،وقدر قيمة الحياةLive every moment like the last moment in your lifeLive by FaithLive by StruggleLive by LoveLive by HopeEstimated value of life