Tuesday, 31 July 2012

Please dear, forget me not

Hey! I may not be there
I wish my memories remain
Please dear, forget me not

Please dear, forget me not
I was a part of your life
I was a part of you

I was a part of you
I may have shrunk to memory
Please dear, forget me not

Please dear, forget me not
Think about those good old days
Please dear, forget me not

As a part of Haiku Challenge
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5 comments:

  1. Amrit SinhaJuly 31, 2012 4:23 pm

    I could feel the yearning in your writing ... well displayed emotions !!!

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  2. LocomenteJuly 31, 2012 7:03 pm

    Thanks a ton Gree

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  3. SimranJuly 31, 2012 10:41 pm

    Touching...
    You displayed the emotions so well :)

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  4. Vinay Leo R.August 01, 2012 10:18 pm

    Dear Locomente, the yearning is profound, and though there are haiku which don't restrict syllables, please stick to 17 or below, for Haiku Heights. Some shoot past it. :)

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  5. MarkAugust 02, 2012 12:11 am

    The repeated refrain certainly drives home the message!

    Forget-Me-Nots

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