Tuesday 31 July 2012

Please dear, forget me not

Hey! I may not be there
I wish my memories remain
Please dear, forget me not

Please dear, forget me not
I was a part of your life
I was a part of you

I was a part of you
I may have shrunk to memory
Please dear, forget me not

Please dear, forget me not
Think about those good old days
Please dear, forget me not

As a part of Haiku Challenge

5 comments:

  1. I could feel the yearning in your writing ... well displayed emotions !!!

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  2. Touching...
    You displayed the emotions so well :)

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  3. Dear Locomente, the yearning is profound, and though there are haiku which don't restrict syllables, please stick to 17 or below, for Haiku Heights. Some shoot past it. :)

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  4. The repeated refrain certainly drives home the message!

    Forget-Me-Nots

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