"Vibrant flowers bloom within" - amazing thought behind this line ... well done :-)
Thanks a ton!!!
nice, liking the last line thus autumn begins
ah!The first line just melted me away!I loved the romantic touch to the haiku. =)
Oh..Romantic touch..liked it..
Ah! How romantic. Autumn begins yes very true ... you have approached this prompt very well.
I Love the vibrant flowers blooming within..as an image for autumn, very romantic.
Lovely interpretation of autumn ~
Lovely and unique thought Loco...!!Enjoyed reading it!
Lovely. It makes me think of an autumn wedding.
A touch of tragedy underneath this, implied by the title?
The inner blooms will always show in the outer life.My Lady Autumn
Quite romantic, but agree with Poetry-Diary... a hint of tragedy too.
I would have to agree, so true for me. I feel sorry for those who enter the autumn of their lives depressed instead. it's still a long road, a good half of our lives is still to come.
"Thus Autumn beings.." I ♥ it.. Someone is Special