Wednesday 5 September 2012

Autumn



Your love and your smile
Vibrant flowers bloom within
Thus autumn begins

As a part of Haiku Challenge

17 comments:

  1. "Vibrant flowers bloom within" - amazing thought behind this line ... well done :-)

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  2. nice, liking the last line thus autumn begins

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  3. ah!
    The first line just melted me away!
    I loved the romantic touch to the haiku. =)

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  4. Oh..Romantic touch..liked it..

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  5. Ah! How romantic. Autumn begins yes very true ... you have approached this prompt very well.

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  6. I Love the vibrant flowers blooming within..as an image for autumn, very romantic.

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  7. Lovely interpretation of autumn ~

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  8. Lovely and unique thought Loco...!!
    Enjoyed reading it!

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  9. Lovely. It makes me think of an autumn wedding.

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  10. A touch of tragedy underneath this, implied by the title?

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  11. The inner blooms will always show in the outer life.

    My Lady Autumn

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  12. Quite romantic, but agree with Poetry-Diary... a hint of tragedy too.

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  13. I would have to agree, so true for me. I feel sorry for those who enter the autumn of their lives depressed instead. it's still a long road, a good half of our lives is still to come.

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  14. "Thus Autumn beings.." I ♥ it..

    Someone is Special

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