Saturday, 8 September 2012

Beloved Parents...



Beloved mother…
You render oodles of love;
Yet, expect nothing
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Beloved father…
Overshadowed by mother
Yet irreplaceable

As a part of Haiku Challenge

13 comments:

  1. Wow ... I liked this one the most ... amazing way to show how important parents are in our lives !!!

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  2. Great take on it, like the use of overshadowed

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  3. Oh, I like both haiku very much! And they are so true :-)
    Best, MK
    http://phoenix-em.com/mariyakoleva

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  4. Very beautiful haiku on parents!..NIcely donE!

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  5. sounds just like my parents.....and I miss them so....

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  6. a wonderful dedication to them :) loved it.

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  7. Such a nice haiku on parenting.

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  8. It's the father in the background who supports the mother in the foreground!


    Render

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  9. True with a seasoning of gentle humor! Thank you so much for visiting my blog!

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  10. nice...the father can def feel overshadowed by the role of the mother...it is good to remind him of your love...

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