Saturday 8 September 2012

Beloved Parents...



Beloved mother…
You render oodles of love;
Yet, expect nothing
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Beloved father…
Overshadowed by mother
Yet irreplaceable

As a part of Haiku Challenge
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13 comments:

  1. Amrit SinhaSeptember 08, 2012 12:51 am

    Wow ... I liked this one the most ... amazing way to show how important parents are in our lives !!!

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 08, 2012 5:56 pm

    Great take on it, like the use of overshadowed

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  3. Mariya KolevaSeptember 08, 2012 7:24 pm

    Oh, I like both haiku very much! And they are so true :-)
    Best, MK
    http://phoenix-em.com/mariyakoleva

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  4. Sri ValliSeptember 08, 2012 9:13 pm

    Very beautiful haiku on parents!..NIcely donE!

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  5. SimranSeptember 08, 2012 9:31 pm

    Touching!

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  6. joanneSeptember 08, 2012 9:59 pm

    sounds just like my parents.....and I miss them so....

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  7. Vinay Leo R.September 08, 2012 10:06 pm

    a wonderful dedication to them :) loved it.

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  8. PattiKenSeptember 08, 2012 10:44 pm

    Such a nice haiku on parenting.

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  9. UnknownSeptember 08, 2012 11:46 pm

    Insightful and touching. Love it.

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  10. MarkSeptember 09, 2012 5:17 am

    It's the father in the background who supports the mother in the foreground!


    Render

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  11. SusanSeptember 09, 2012 8:01 pm

    True with a seasoning of gentle humor! Thank you so much for visiting my blog!

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  12. TCPCJune 18, 2013 4:38 pm

    wonderful

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  13. Brian MillerJune 18, 2013 5:12 pm

    nice...the father can def feel overshadowed by the role of the mother...it is good to remind him of your love...

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