Monday, 30 September 2013

Crooked Time...


Hey, this is crooked
Why can't life be as I wish?
Why can't the time freeze?

Why can't the time freeze?
Let me relive happy times
With a sweet broad smile!
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11 comments:

  1. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 30, 2013 6:20 pm

    Unfortunately, there's no going back, and no standing still!

    http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2013/09/30/prayer-2/

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 30, 2013 7:23 pm

    If only wishes were horses!

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  3. Ramesh SoodSeptember 30, 2013 8:01 pm

    It's all there inside us...you can always relive....the delight of being a part of Haiku Heights for the whole month..
    Thanks Satya...it had been a fascinating journey...

    Hope to see more of haiku from you..

    RS:)

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    1. LocomenteSeptember 30, 2013 8:17 pm

      Thanks sir.,..
      It was indeed a great journey...

      Sure sir...
      Hoping to read more interesting haiku from you too sir :)

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  4. Sumana RoySeptember 30, 2013 9:16 pm

    yes.......if only...........wonderful thought Satya....

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  5. AnonymousOctober 01, 2013 1:18 pm

    Time and tide waits for no one.
    Wonderful haiku. I liked both of them.
    I also want to say thank you for visiting my blog and encouraging me with your comment. :) Thanks.

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  6. UnknownOctober 01, 2013 2:13 pm

    Beyond everything....the tears,the smiles...you have to thank the LIFE in itself....its WONDERFUL....Happiness everytime can be monotonous.....Thank the present for the experience,past for learning and future for Improvement.......!!!!

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