As I wait here
To see you
To hear you
I think of your smiles
Silly at times
Naughty sometimes
Full of love most of the time
Then those little eyes
Sparkling with a twinkle
That winks and droops in sleep
That peers through my eyes
And those rare intense looks
Ah! As I wait here
I miss you
I miss you so much
That I almost feel your presence around
I almost hear your laughter
And that voice full emanating warmth
Suddenly I realize...
Loved ones will always remain in our hearts
And we can feel them through our breaths;
Here them through our heartbeats!
This is such a lovely love filled poem :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Anisha :)
DeleteIndeed, loved ones never part they always stay in our hearts. Lovely write...:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ankita :)
DeleteBeautifully penned moments of waiting for a loved one.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot!! :)
DeleteDeep feelings nicely expressed!:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Tarang :)
DeleteYes, they forever inhabit a room in the house of our heart.
ReplyDeleteVery much... they do...
DeleteThanks Cosmo:)
'That I almost feel your presence around'...that's where our loved ones stay...a beautiful write up Satya..wish you a happy new year :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sumana...
DeleteWishing you a happy and memorable new year!!!
So romantic. A very sweet but lively poem. The last 3 lines bring in a feeling of eternity. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteThanks Suzy :)
Deleteromantic poem with a tinge of sadness... lovely write....
ReplyDeleteThanks Robert :)
Deleteromantic and lovely
ReplyDeleteThanks Vandana :)
DeleteYes they always remain within us, the memories playing hide and seek at times, and we smile tears :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Amrit :)
DeleteI feel the connection of my loved ones even very far away. I often know when they are sad or happy and always seem to know when they are in trouble. I like you you explain it that we feel them in our heartbeat and breathing. For some reason I understand that exactly!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot...
DeleteGlad that you liked :)
Makes me think of countless hours spent waiting for my kids after school finishes. Great writing.
ReplyDeleteCiao
Pea
Aw... thats so sweet...
DeleteThanks a lot Pea :)
How wonderful to feel that warmth and closeness. You describe it so well.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Sherry :)
DeleteI love the closing lines! I certainly feel some who have passed...
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Rachel :)
Deleteindeed Loved ones will always remain in our hearts....happy new year
ReplyDeleteThanks jossina...
DeleteHv a great year ahead! !