Friday, 27 December 2013

As I wait

As I wait here
To see you
To hear you
I think of your smiles
Silly at times
Naughty sometimes
Full of love most of the time
Then those little eyes
Sparkling with a twinkle
That winks and droops in sleep
That peers through my eyes
And those rare intense looks
Ah! As I wait here
I miss you
I miss you so much
That I almost feel your presence around
I almost hear your laughter
And that voice full emanating warmth
Suddenly I realize...
Loved ones will always remain in our hearts
And we can feel them through our breaths;
Here them through our heartbeats!




30 comments:

  1. This is such a lovely love filled poem :)

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  2. Indeed, loved ones never part they always stay in our hearts. Lovely write...:)

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  3. Beautifully penned moments of waiting for a loved one.

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  4. Deep feelings nicely expressed!:)

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  5. Yes, they forever inhabit a room in the house of our heart.

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    1. Very much... they do...
      Thanks Cosmo:)

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  6. 'That I almost feel your presence around'...that's where our loved ones stay...a beautiful write up Satya..wish you a happy new year :)

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    1. Thanks Sumana...
      Wishing you a happy and memorable new year!!!

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  7. So romantic. A very sweet but lively poem. The last 3 lines bring in a feeling of eternity. Lovely.

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  8. romantic poem with a tinge of sadness... lovely write....

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  9. Yes they always remain within us, the memories playing hide and seek at times, and we smile tears :-)

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  10. I feel the connection of my loved ones even very far away. I often know when they are sad or happy and always seem to know when they are in trouble. I like you you explain it that we feel them in our heartbeat and breathing. For some reason I understand that exactly!

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    1. Thanks a lot...
      Glad that you liked :)

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  11. Makes me think of countless hours spent waiting for my kids after school finishes. Great writing.
    Ciao
    Pea

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    1. Aw... thats so sweet...
      Thanks a lot Pea :)

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  12. How wonderful to feel that warmth and closeness. You describe it so well.

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  13. I love the closing lines! I certainly feel some who have passed...

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  14. indeed Loved ones will always remain in our hearts....happy new year

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    1. Thanks jossina...
      Hv a great year ahead! !

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