Friday, 17 January 2014

Sharpness of your eyes...

Sharpness of your eyes
Distracts me. It cuts my heart
And it bleeds for you!
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20 comments:

  1. Judith WesterfieldJanuary 19, 2014 5:37 am

    Sharp! In the best way possible. Enjoyed, enjoyed.

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  2. Sherry Blue SkyJanuary 20, 2014 8:18 am

    Words of compassion......nice to find you in the Pantry, kiddo!

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  3. PealogicJanuary 20, 2014 11:31 pm

    Sharp, succinct Haiku, great writing.

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  4. UnknownJanuary 21, 2014 11:42 pm

    Well done!

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  5. ReshmaJanuary 22, 2014 1:26 am

    Ouch, it really hurts when a loved one is angry...

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  6. UnknownJanuary 22, 2014 8:53 am

    vivid imagery!! :) nicely done :)

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  7. Milan RajkumarJanuary 22, 2014 2:14 pm

    the sharpness ,i can feel it !

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  8. Aayesha S HakimJanuary 22, 2014 9:59 pm

    simply lovely! :)

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  9. Magical Mystical TeacherJanuary 23, 2014 9:02 pm

    Sorrow!

    Raking Sharp Shadows

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  10. UnknownJanuary 24, 2014 3:32 pm

    Sharp eyes, cutting the heart! Oh how cruel. Nice ona Satya.

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