Friday 17 January 2014

Sharpness of your eyes...

Sharpness of your eyes
Distracts me. It cuts my heart
And it bleeds for you!


20 comments:

  1. Sharp! In the best way possible. Enjoyed, enjoyed.

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  2. Words of compassion......nice to find you in the Pantry, kiddo!

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  3. Sharp, succinct Haiku, great writing.

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  4. Ouch, it really hurts when a loved one is angry...

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  5. vivid imagery!! :) nicely done :)

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  6. Sharp eyes, cutting the heart! Oh how cruel. Nice ona Satya.

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