Sunday, 31 August 2014

Scared I Am…

Scared I am…
As I wait for your reply.
Never have I felt like this
A silent prayer never stops in the back of my mind.
I pray that you say what I anticipate
I wish that you become mine
In all the ways
In more than one way
Hurt me not!
Leave me not…

-

23 comments:

  1. SGAugust 31, 2014 2:35 am

    Please don't be scared. Your wish will come true.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Brian MillerAugust 31, 2014 5:39 pm

    oy i feel your anticipation...especially when you take a risk --- like expressing your love....that wait can be miserable...smiles...hope the answer is good...

    ReplyDelete
  3. Sumana RoyAugust 31, 2014 9:30 pm

    nice lines Satya.. :)

    ReplyDelete
  4. MaryAugust 31, 2014 10:45 pm

    It is hard to take such a risk. Your poem expresses this well. I do hope that your risk is rewarded!

    ReplyDelete
  5. Sherry Blue SkyAugust 31, 2014 11:21 pm

    You have captured well the fear, angst and joy of caring.

    ReplyDelete
  6. anilkurup59August 31, 2014 11:22 pm

    That is asking a bit too much, I mean pleading a bit too much. Is that warranted?

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. LocomenteSeptember 01, 2014 8:40 pm

      In love, almost everything is warranted...
      As they say, all is fair in love and war...

      Thanks Anil :)

      Delete
  7. SusanSeptember 01, 2014 3:06 am

    Love. The thoughts not said and ALMOST unthought, because the voice knows. Knows deeply.

    ReplyDelete
  8. Old EggSeptember 01, 2014 4:14 pm

    The apprehension is palpable in your words. In fact I felt a little nervous for the speaker and her slight hesitancy.

    ReplyDelete
  9. Amrit SinhaSeptember 01, 2014 6:28 pm

    It's sad when fear creeps in love ... well written

    ReplyDelete
  10. J.N.T.September 02, 2014 12:52 am

    Awww...Locomente, may your love be sweet and kind to you cause I feel for your fear of him or her. Hope things go well soon. :)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. LocomenteSeptember 02, 2014 1:21 am

      Na.. Life always gives the unexpected... Fears and desires is nothing in front of destiny...
      Thanks James :)

      Delete
  11. ZQSeptember 02, 2014 12:55 am

    Yup! Put another quarter in the slott...hang on... eeh haw... who knows? "I may ride this mechanical bull long enough to get off walking, and, holding someone's hand" :-)
    I thought you did well snagging that whiskful theme.
    ZQ

    ReplyDelete
  12. Stormcat PoetrySeptember 02, 2014 8:08 pm

    I often feel this way too . . . the reply can never come fast enough and when there is delay a thousand what-ifs fill your head. The hardest is to remain aloof and practical so as to try and mollify the possibility of disappointment that will undoubtedly hammer your self esteem should the dream eventually die. I wish you the best!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. LocomenteSeptember 02, 2014 8:37 pm

      You said it right... The uncertainty and fear...
      The doubts and desires...
      Thanks!

      Delete

    • Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)