Monday, 17 November 2014

A November Morning

Hot coffee beside
On a November morning
I think about you

I think about you
Many memories unfold
And, coffee turns cold
PS: Thanks to Haiku Horizons for the prompt – ColdJ


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38 comments:

  1. SGNovember 17, 2014 8:45 am

    Drink the coffee soon
    Getting late to go to work
    Come back to the earth

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  2. Ankita November 17, 2014 9:48 am

    it happens often with me..I keep pondering about something and coffee becomes cold :P

    nice Haiku :)

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    1. LocomenteNovember 17, 2014 10:50 am

      For me it happens if i am watching tv...

      Thanks Ankita :)

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  3. AnonymousNovember 17, 2014 2:41 pm

    Very bittersweet, this series -- nicely done.

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  4. anilkurup59November 17, 2014 3:37 pm

    Ha , ha the final result , it is amusing isn't it?

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  5. KParthasarathiNovember 17, 2014 4:10 pm

    Brought a smile.Elegant blog.I will follow regularly.

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  6. MeghaNovember 17, 2014 4:24 pm

    That's a touching one... :)

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  7. Lonely soulNovember 17, 2014 4:25 pm

    This one is so cute..dz actually happens with most of the people I guess..;-)

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    1. LocomenteNovember 17, 2014 4:29 pm

      Very much... And mostly when coffee is beside...

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  8. Ramesh SoodNovember 17, 2014 5:28 pm

    This is beautiful..yet the lingering memories must have stayed warm..

    I am here: http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/11/moon-gives-cold-look.html

    RS

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  9. AnonymousNovember 17, 2014 8:40 pm

    I love coffee so. Great haiku.

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  10. Sumana RoyNovember 17, 2014 10:50 pm

    a good one!

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  11. AnonymousNovember 17, 2014 11:04 pm

    can feel the memories unfold..time passes. Very nice

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  12. Ordinary Indian WomanNovember 17, 2014 11:29 pm

    Nice verse, Satya.

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  13. Magical Mystical TeacherNovember 17, 2014 11:42 pm

    That's a lot of thoughts for the coffee to turn cold! ;)

    Lingering Cold

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  14. rallentandaNovember 18, 2014 8:03 am

    Cold coffee is too big a price for such thoughts:)

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    1. LocomenteNovember 18, 2014 11:13 am

      Maybe that's why cold coffee is expensive too :P
      Thanks Rallentanda :)

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  15. UnknownNovember 19, 2014 1:15 am

    I have heard that coffee is only good hot. Sadly, I have never developed a taste for it hot or cold. Love your haiku though.

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    1. LocomenteNovember 19, 2014 10:34 am

      In that case I guess that you are a tea lover!
      Thanks a lot Kathy...

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  16. Judith WesterfieldNovember 19, 2014 9:57 am

    "and, coffee turns cold" - most perfect last line ever - it creates such an unexpected visual and sentiment

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  17. payal agarwalNovember 21, 2014 3:57 pm

    bittersweet..when coffee turns cold, enjoy it with icecream.. :)

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    1. LocomenteNovember 21, 2014 4:22 pm

      Aha! That's an interesting idea :)
      Thanks Payal :)

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  18. AathiraNovember 22, 2014 10:56 am

    This was beautiful, Satya! The subtle hint of melancholy is perfect :)

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  19. AliceNovember 23, 2014 9:32 pm

    Sweet and romantic.

    PS:
    I've been trying on and off for days (again over the months since I got back to the USA) to find a way to get a comment from wordpress to blogger. This capacity seems to be intermittent and vanishing. So I opened an ancient and unused blogger account to use for commenting on blogger accounts. But, alas, it doesn't link to me or my blog.

    https://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2014/11/22/cold-honey/

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    1. LocomenteNovember 24, 2014 8:26 am

      Aww... Thanks a lot for all the effort... And the comments :)

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