Monday, 17 November 2014

A November Morning

Hot coffee beside
On a November morning
I think about you

I think about you
Many memories unfold
And, coffee turns cold
PS: Thanks to Haiku Horizons for the prompt – ColdJ


38 comments:

  1. Drink the coffee soon
    Getting late to go to work
    Come back to the earth

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  2. it happens often with me..I keep pondering about something and coffee becomes cold :P

    nice Haiku :)

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    1. For me it happens if i am watching tv...

      Thanks Ankita :)

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  3. Very bittersweet, this series -- nicely done.

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  4. Ha , ha the final result , it is amusing isn't it?

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  5. Brought a smile.Elegant blog.I will follow regularly.

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  6. This one is so cute..dz actually happens with most of the people I guess..;-)

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    1. Very much... And mostly when coffee is beside...

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  7. This is beautiful..yet the lingering memories must have stayed warm..

    I am here: http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/11/moon-gives-cold-look.html

    RS

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  8. can feel the memories unfold..time passes. Very nice

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  9. That's a lot of thoughts for the coffee to turn cold! ;)

    Lingering Cold

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  10. Cold coffee is too big a price for such thoughts:)

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    1. Maybe that's why cold coffee is expensive too :P
      Thanks Rallentanda :)

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  11. I have heard that coffee is only good hot. Sadly, I have never developed a taste for it hot or cold. Love your haiku though.

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    1. In that case I guess that you are a tea lover!
      Thanks a lot Kathy...

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  12. "and, coffee turns cold" - most perfect last line ever - it creates such an unexpected visual and sentiment

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  13. bittersweet..when coffee turns cold, enjoy it with icecream.. :)

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    1. Aha! That's an interesting idea :)
      Thanks Payal :)

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  14. This was beautiful, Satya! The subtle hint of melancholy is perfect :)

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  15. Sweet and romantic.

    PS:
    I've been trying on and off for days (again over the months since I got back to the USA) to find a way to get a comment from wordpress to blogger. This capacity seems to be intermittent and vanishing. So I opened an ancient and unused blogger account to use for commenting on blogger accounts. But, alas, it doesn't link to me or my blog.

    https://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2014/11/22/cold-honey/

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    1. Aww... Thanks a lot for all the effort... And the comments :)

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