Sunday, 16 November 2014

Whenever you near me

Whenever you near me
I feel as if…
Flowers are blooming within
Summer rain is drizzling in heart
Rainbows are coloring my life
And gentle waves are kissing my feet.

Whenever you near me
I feel as if…
Mellow rays of sun is caressing me
Cool December breeze is embracing me
Several moons are smiling at me
And sweet diamond stars are showering on me.

Whenever you near me
I feel as if…
I am feeling week on my feet
My heart is racing faster and faster
My mouth is becoming drier and drier
And my stomach churns out of both anxiety and excitement!

Whenever you near me
I feel as if…
I am the queen
My happiness sees no bounds
Time flutters faster and faster
And I become the happiest alive!

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38 comments:

  1. Ankita November 16, 2014 12:06 am

    gal..u r in LOVE!! <3 who's the lucky guy??

    :)

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  2. anilkurup59November 16, 2014 9:55 am

    Wow, this is something that is simply awe. A wonderfully crafted romantic feel

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  3. SGNovember 16, 2014 12:47 pm

    Beautiful. Very romantic. Have you heard of this song from Ace of Base?

    Whenever you're near me
    I give you everything I have
    Someone to believe in
    When things are good and when they're bad

    This is what your "imaginary" lover would have replied.

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    1. LocomenteNovember 17, 2014 8:22 am

      Awww.. This is so wonderful...
      Sadly I dont listen to English songs or watch movies for that matter...
      So I didnt know :)

      Thanks SG :)

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  4. Vandana SharmaNovember 16, 2014 2:37 pm

    Love in the air.............

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  5. Old EggNovember 16, 2014 2:43 pm

    Love can make poets of us all. Let's hope you have this beautiful feeling always.

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  6. NatašekNovember 16, 2014 2:55 pm

    lovely feeling.

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  7. Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)November 16, 2014 3:09 pm

    Sweet and innocent poem of love filling

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  8. alan1704November 16, 2014 3:28 pm

    Beautifully done, so full of love. Great writing.

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  9. Sumana RoyNovember 16, 2014 4:45 pm

    hmm....pure sweetness...power of words is such...lovely

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  10. brudbergNovember 16, 2014 5:29 pm

    Love is music indeed.

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  11. Kathryn DycheNovember 16, 2014 6:13 pm

    love in all its beauty.

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  12. MaryNovember 16, 2014 6:44 pm

    It is wonderful to have a love in one's life who makes you feel the 'happiness that knows no bounds.'

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  13. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryNovember 16, 2014 9:34 pm

    love is sweet when the one you desire is around...
    good luck.

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  14. Sherry Blue SkyNovember 17, 2014 12:51 am

    Love the lines "summer rain is drizzling in heart" and "rainbows are coloring my life". Beautiful imagery in this piece.

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  15. kaykualaNovember 17, 2014 8:14 am

    How nice and how reassuring that a loved one can relate in such dear terms.Obviously the relationship is loving and perfectly entwined. Great lines Locomente!

    Hank

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  16. Lonely soulNovember 17, 2014 4:30 pm

    This one is really so beautiful...so beautifully written.. jz awesome..!!

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  17. Gen Giggles November 18, 2014 9:33 am

    Yes love does that to us. What a great poem.

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  18. J.N.T.November 19, 2014 1:14 am

    I am so glad that this poem is positive! it makes me happy knowing you are happy!!! :D

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    1. LocomenteNovember 19, 2014 11:03 am

      Ah! I think its a happy poem after a long-long time :)
      Thanks James :)

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  19. M'Bai MadrasiDecember 09, 2014 10:33 am

    Give it a tone, and theres a lovely song to sing :)

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