Sunday, 16 November 2014

Whenever you near me

Whenever you near me
I feel as if…
Flowers are blooming within
Summer rain is drizzling in heart
Rainbows are coloring my life
And gentle waves are kissing my feet.

Whenever you near me
I feel as if…
Mellow rays of sun is caressing me
Cool December breeze is embracing me
Several moons are smiling at me
And sweet diamond stars are showering on me.

Whenever you near me
I feel as if…
I am feeling week on my feet
My heart is racing faster and faster
My mouth is becoming drier and drier
And my stomach churns out of both anxiety and excitement!

Whenever you near me
I feel as if…
I am the queen
My happiness sees no bounds
Time flutters faster and faster
And I become the happiest alive!

40 comments:

  1. gal..u r in LOVE!! <3 who's the lucky guy??

    :)

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  2. Wow, this is something that is simply awe. A wonderfully crafted romantic feel

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  3. Beautiful. Very romantic. Have you heard of this song from Ace of Base?

    Whenever you're near me
    I give you everything I have
    Someone to believe in
    When things are good and when they're bad

    This is what your "imaginary" lover would have replied.

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    1. Awww.. This is so wonderful...
      Sadly I dont listen to English songs or watch movies for that matter...
      So I didnt know :)

      Thanks SG :)

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  4. Love can make poets of us all. Let's hope you have this beautiful feeling always.

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  5. Beautifully done, so full of love. Great writing.

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  6. hmm....pure sweetness...power of words is such...lovely

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  7. It is wonderful to have a love in one's life who makes you feel the 'happiness that knows no bounds.'

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  8. love is sweet when the one you desire is around...
    good luck.

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  9. Love the lines "summer rain is drizzling in heart" and "rainbows are coloring my life". Beautiful imagery in this piece.

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  10. How nice and how reassuring that a loved one can relate in such dear terms.Obviously the relationship is loving and perfectly entwined. Great lines Locomente!

    Hank

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  11. This one is really so beautiful...so beautifully written.. jz awesome..!!

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  12. Yes love does that to us. What a great poem.

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  13. I am so glad that this poem is positive! it makes me happy knowing you are happy!!! :D

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    1. Ah! I think its a happy poem after a long-long time :)
      Thanks James :)

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  14. Give it a tone, and theres a lovely song to sing :)

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