Sunday, 12 July 2015

Dirty Secret

You love me, I know.
I love you – And you know that.
Please let the world know.

Hey! Let the world know.
Dirty secret - Am I?
Please, don’t hesitate


38 comments:

  1. Ooh - nice turn around..who does have the power in these situations? hmm...and :)

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  2. uh oh...i like the two voices :)

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  3. It was a laugh but I half expected "Dont call back" at the end.

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    1. May be thats the next stage... Also wondering is it so easy!

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  4. I think being someone's dirty secret is far from love.

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    1. So do I... And thats the worst situation!

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  5. Whoops! This tiny gem contains a double-edged sword!

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  6. point! nice I like it! boys who are flirts and shy away from commitment usually treat their girlfriends just like you mentioned- a dirty secret!

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    1. Your comment makes me wonder... I have not mentioned any gender here... What made you conclude that the boy is commitment phobia... Why can it not be the girl?

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  7. Oh that was a twist but oh so real in love sometimes....

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  8. The lover's plea to be seen. Well written.

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  9. Oooh, I smell a rat, why the lack of acknowledgement?!!

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  10. Who lets the world know... yeah. indeed.

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  11. Good one! True love don't need to hide

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  12. hey, this looks very simple, but very thoughtfully penned. Loved it. especially the conversation.

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  13. So little words.. such a deep meaning loco..
    Enjoyed this one!

    Cheers

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  14. See I think it would be a terrible place to be,
    the dirty little secret - with no one
    ever knowing your love

    and them pretending it is not there.

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    1. Terrible place indeed...
      Thanks :)

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