Crisp and sharp - that torn paper sings like a broken heart
I wonder why this crumpling, story not good? It's better to die than living a devalued life....
What a parallel there is to life here. We are formed, develop, achieve, then sadly become nothing again.
Very effective metaphor.
That sounds very sad. Once that paper stands up and uncle plus itself, it will move on to write a happier story. Trust me, I know these things, smiles.
May be the story is not worth the paper it is written on.
Ouch. Painfully descriptive metaphor...works wonderfully!
Such a powerful metaphor here. Much said in a short poem....great writing!
A beautiful metaphor which I relate!Donna@LivingFromHappiness
He giveth and he taketh...the value is in our own perception of worth. It hurts to be crumpled and thrown in a corner...
Whatever happens happens for good! The words cannot be erased from the heart...
Though crumpled, now you no more remain as plain.. good or sad u got something!
What a tragic love story, but this happens in real life for sure. In few lines you have managed to channel some powerful emotions. This is a great write! :)
Sometimes the crumbled papers contain the best stories, untold
After using throwing wastebin. Now a days it is common.Nice.
This is not just the story of paper, but also how we are betrayed by some in life ... very well expressed :-)
Perhaps someone got a better script to rewrite and crumbled papers isn’t a way of disregard, but a step forward in reaching that height! Nice thought
the journey of life, beautifully summed up!!
Wonderful expression of the broken heart. Simple and perfectly told. Jus' loved it.