This is beautiful! I like the idea of one bleeding love and not blood ❤️Lots of love,Sanaa
Agree entirely with Sanaa - perfectly balanced too, like th best of swords and poems too!! With Best Wishes...
Yes, that sword is like the arrows of Amor, bleeding not the blood...
An edge for each.......it is true, both sides hurt in such situations.
Sometimes that is indeed the case.. Succinctly written
A real state of love! Liked the connectivity
I know very well about his 2 edged sword ... still fighting the urge to strike, but not yet ... but not yet ... awesome poem, friend Locomente. Love, cat
Bleeding love!That's wonderfully said. The leverage poets have is amazing.
Nice play of ideas.