Saturday 8 October 2016

Two-Edged Sword

Love -
A two-edged sword
Connecting you and me.
Hurting both of us.
And we bleed love;
Not blood!

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10 comments:

  1. Sanaa RizviOctober 09, 2016 8:33 pm

    This is beautiful! I like the idea of one bleeding love and not blood ❤️

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  2. scotthastiepoetOctober 09, 2016 9:25 pm

    Agree entirely with Sanaa - perfectly balanced too, like th best of swords and poems too!! With Best Wishes...

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  3. brudbergOctober 09, 2016 9:46 pm

    Yes, that sword is like the arrows of Amor, bleeding not the blood...

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  4. Sherry Blue SkyOctober 09, 2016 10:25 pm

    An edge for each.......it is true, both sides hurt in such situations.

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  5. Jae RoseOctober 10, 2016 12:08 am

    Sometimes that is indeed the case.. Succinctly written

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  6. JeevanOctober 10, 2016 2:01 pm

    A real state of love! Liked the connectivity

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  7. rudraprayagaOctober 10, 2016 7:51 pm

    Brilliant thought.

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  8. ^.^October 11, 2016 1:51 am

    I know very well about his 2 edged sword ... still fighting the urge to strike, but not yet ... but not yet ... awesome poem, friend Locomente. Love, cat

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  9. anilkurup59October 11, 2016 8:14 am

    Bleeding love!
    That's wonderfully said. The leverage poets have is amazing.

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  10. Rosemary Nissen-WadeOctober 11, 2016 5:12 pm

    Nice play of ideas.

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