Friday, 19 April 2013

Reach Heights Together



Dear, Can you hug it?
It means you love me a lot
She declared to him

She declared to him
He tried wholeheartedly
But alas! He failed

But alas! He failed
She joined him from other side
And hugged the minar

They hugged the minar
Together they can reach heights
They realized. Wow!

As a part of Haiku Challenge

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5 comments:

  1. NankaApril 19, 2013 11:41 am

    Love the last one and so profound too!! Speaks volumes on social changes!!

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  2. Gemma WisemanApril 19, 2013 2:32 pm

    Heights can certainly be attained with aspiring minds and hearts! Interesting set of haiku!

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  3. AnonymousApril 19, 2013 3:20 pm

    Impressive creation depicting beliefs.

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  4. Sri ValliApril 19, 2013 8:06 pm

    Oh my! You have romantic heart dear! Beautiful flow of haiku! :)

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  5. Amrit SinhaApril 20, 2013 12:29 am

    You depicted the story quite well ... that iron pillar does stand strong even today besides the Minar !!!

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