Saturday, 3 August 2013

Silently and Secretly


Oh! As I see you
Walking along the beachside
Hand in hand, I wish

I silently wish
That I was the mighty waves
And thus enwrap you

I secretly wish
That I was the golden sand
And kiss you gently


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11 comments:

  1. Tarang SinhaAugust 04, 2013 9:17 am

    Nice one!:)

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  2. Siggi in Downeast MaineAugust 05, 2013 9:23 am

    "I secretly wish
    That I was the golden sand"
    An awesome thought ...WoW.
    I'm so not romantic and those kind of words
    don't flow from my mind...
    I'm in awe...
    wonderful and memorable.
    Peace
    Siggi

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    1. LocomenteAugust 05, 2013 10:06 am

      Thanks a lot Siggi...
      Your comments making me feel awesome...
      Thanks for dropping by :)

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  3. AnonymousAugust 05, 2013 11:27 pm

    So sweetly written

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  4. PanchaliAugust 06, 2013 12:12 am

    Wow..a beautifully romantic take. Loved it:)

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  5. ReshmaAugust 06, 2013 5:10 am

    Love sure colors the world in magic. Loved the secret and silent wishes.

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    1. LocomenteAugust 06, 2013 10:40 am

      Very true...
      Thanks Reshma for dropping by and showering with your wonderful comments! :)

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  6. Amrit SinhaAugust 06, 2013 12:09 pm

    Lovely romanticism ... you sure write awesome love tales.

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    1. LocomenteAugust 06, 2013 12:40 pm

      Thanks Amrit...
      I take it as a complement! :)

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