Monday, 14 July 2014

Drive

Drive safe, she pleaded
You didn't. Wore no helmet.
Head smashed. Very Grave
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You drive me crazy
With your unbound love and care
Wow! I feel blessed

PS: Thanks Haiku Horizons for this wonderful prompt - Drive

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24 comments:

  1. The EnchantressJuly 14, 2014 10:36 am

    lovely

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  2. Brian MillerJuly 14, 2014 5:15 pm

    that is a good kinda crazy in that second one...
    the first...ouch...see a couple of those wrecks
    not pretty at all...

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  3. SoumyaJuly 14, 2014 6:58 pm

    Lovely take! Super contractions though :)

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  4. AnonymousJuly 14, 2014 8:21 pm

    Lovely haiku, especially the second one..

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  5. UnknownJuly 14, 2014 11:18 pm

    The first so tragic, the last romantic! Love them both. You rocked this prompt on all angles.

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  6. Magical Mystical TeacherJuly 15, 2014 2:21 am

    Two takes on the prompt, both from vastly different perspectives!

    Driven into Tender Flesh

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  7. AnonymousJuly 15, 2014 4:36 am

    I could never understand why people drive without a helmet -- so sad. But the second is so sweet!
    Great post :)

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  8. UnknownJuly 15, 2014 8:06 am

    Both are awesome, Satya, though conveying opposite thoughts.

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  9. Ankita July 15, 2014 12:42 pm

    loved both but the second one a bit more! Sometimes craziness is sign of a deep love :)

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  10. AnonymousJuly 15, 2014 10:56 pm

    a wonderful pair ! and the second one is so lovely !

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  11. rudraprayagaJuly 16, 2014 1:03 pm

    Very suitable for the present.

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  12. Gemma WisemanJuly 17, 2014 1:32 pm

    From despair to bliss. Delightful contrast.

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  13. ReshmaJuly 19, 2014 5:42 am

    Loved both the takes Satya, sorrow and joy, well balanced.

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