Tuesday 3 April 2012

Harbor

Why you harbor against me…
Am I that bad? I feel hurt.
Wont you ever pardon me?

As a part of Haiku Challenge

5 comments:

  1. Content is great ~ may I suggest ~ form for haiku is 5-7 - 5 ~ 3 lines and 17 syllables ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  2. I will surely work on it.. Thanks... keep reading

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  3. Keep practicing ... by the end of the month it will feel more natural.

    Use 3 lines with either 3 syllables in the first followed by 5, then 3.

    OR 3 lines with syllable form of 5 for the first, then 7 followed by 5.

    This is my Day 3 ~~ Harbor.

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  4. But many asking to follow 5-7-5... I am confused. And decided to stick to that... And thanks...

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