I enjoyed reading this haiku!...So thoughtful!
Good thought..but,just fo ryou to take a fresh look ..on syllables for the Haiku...
but it is part of our life :) nice haiku :)
Nice thoughts...like RS said, you may have to revise to fit the haiku form ~
Contemplative ~ very good ~thanks, namaste, ^_^check haiku form
Thanks all for showeringe me with comments... I am new entrant in haiku challenge and with practice i hope to be making less of mistakes... And if you liked my blog.. Why dont you people plz follow it?
Hey, cool question! Never answered :-)PS. I can't comment with my Name and URL, so here's my haiku for the day: http://phoenix-em.com/mariyakoleva/2012/04/waves-haiku-for-day-5/
I enjoyed the intent and direction, but as Ramesh and Grace previously stated --- count the syllables to go along with either 3 - 5 - 3 syllable form or 5 - 7 - 5 syllable form. Haiku is enjoyable to write once one gets the hang of it.This is my Day 5 ~~ Waves Wash Over Me.