Thursday 5 April 2012

Waves



Everybody dreams and thrive hard
To be on the crest of waves
But is that life about?
As a part of Haiku Challenge

8 comments:

  1. I enjoyed reading this haiku!...So thoughtful!

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  2. Good thought..but,just fo ryou to take a fresh look ..on syllables for the Haiku...

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  3. but it is part of our life :) nice haiku :)

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  4. Nice thoughts...like RS said, you may have to revise to fit the haiku form ~

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  5. Contemplative ~ very good ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

    check haiku form

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  6. Thanks all for showeringe me with comments... I am new entrant in haiku challenge and with practice i hope to be making less of mistakes... And if you liked my blog.. Why dont you people plz follow it?

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  7. Hey, cool question! Never answered :-)
    PS. I can't comment with my Name and URL, so here's my haiku for the day: http://phoenix-em.com/mariyakoleva/2012/04/waves-haiku-for-day-5/

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  8. I enjoyed the intent and direction, but as Ramesh and Grace previously stated --- count the syllables to go along with either 3 - 5 - 3 syllable form or 5 - 7 - 5 syllable form. Haiku is enjoyable to write once one gets the hang of it.

    This is my Day 5 ~~ Waves Wash Over Me.

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