Saturday, 9 August 2014

Alone I Feel...

Alone I feel...

Why silence is echoing around...
Where did your laughter vanish?

Those little eyes were my source of light...
Now I am in dark.

My fingers are missing the silk of your hair...
Now those little joys are not anymore...

A tear escapes my eyes. ..
The very eyes that used to drink your charm!

At last I try to sleep...
To catch you in dreams and hug you tight...
But sleep fails to kiss me...

Where are you?

To cuddle me...
To embrace me…


 Let me feel the heaven in your arms...
Let me drift to sleep in the cradle of your chest...

Where are you?

Starry night is not beautiful anymore...
Missing those twinkling eyes...

Velvety sky is not enticing anymore...
Missing your tickling think hair...

Oh! I wish I could sleep and see you in dreams....

Where are you?


Alone I feel...

34 comments:

  1. things lose their spell and beauty if we cannot share them with those we love anymore... the loneliness is palpable in this...

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    1. Things becomes meaningless if there is no one to share...Well said...

      Thanks Claudia :)

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  2. beautiful.. can relate to it at this moment completely!

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  3. you've nicely created that void and the longing Satya....

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  4. A longing where only in the dreams we can be together.. Very well penned.

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  5. Vivid and heart felt, you words a crafted with the heart

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  6. Pathos plus. The loss of (or lack of) a cuddle is immensely sad.

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  7. sad! i hate missing people... its feels lonely!! beautifully said!!

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    1. It does...
      I also hate to miss people...
      Its the worst thing...

      Thanks Arushi :)

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  8. Missing people (and animals) is the pits.

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    1. I liked that you mentioned that missing animals can be bad too...
      Thanks Sancho :)

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  9. You certainly get used to the touch, the scent and warmth of a loved one.

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  10. there is a sadness beyond just being loneliness...perhaps i feel a bit of fear that they dont know where the other is...and they are truly missing....which lacks hope...or threatens the hope they will ever see each other again

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    1. That is also a possibility...
      Thanks Brian :)

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  11. A sad piece... I hope the artist wakes up soon to what is present and waiting for a new love :-)
    ZQ

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    1. Aha! That sounds inspiring and motivating...
      Thanks :)

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  12. I remember that feeling of losing the beauty of the night sky, after love was lost. It does come back though, in time....

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    1. Nights seems to be never ending...
      And hope would have died...
      True...

      Thanks Sherry :)

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  13. Your longing is remarkably portrayed in your poem. I smiled as I read it to myself on this sunny day here in Maryland. You've won me over.

    jamztoma
    Jamztoma.blogspot.com

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    1. Thanks James...
      I am glad you liked it and that I could make you smile :)

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  14. A wonderfully expressed feeling of loss.

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  15. So nice melancholia here...I taste it...a romance

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