:) from birth to death or from birth to rebirth through death is a full circle...
That's a different perspective I would be... At the end of the day, (re)birth is the beginning!
Nice haiku though the subject is debatable.
Yes, it is very much debatable... And, the very mystery makes this more attractive!
Very well said! :)
Birth to death? well before? Where does the circular act begin? Where does it end? And sou- what is that?Apart from that, poetic license is unquestionable and you seem to have used it well.
Aah!! These questions remain.. Which makes me think... Thanks Anil :)
Profound and a Haiku that's full with the never ending cycle.
Thanks a lot :)
A nice Haiku dwelling on a perpetual riddle!!
Thanks madam :)
And the circle continues :-)
Perfect haiku for the perfection of our soul. My highest compliment: wish I had written it.
Aww! Thanks a lot Judith :)