Monday, 10 November 2014

Jouney of the Soul

Well, from birth to death,
The soul goes a full circle;
Before the rebirth!

PS: Thanks to Haiku Horizons for the prompt – Full 

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17 comments:

  1. Ankita November 10, 2014 2:07 pm

    true :)

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  2. LocomenteNovember 10, 2014 3:22 pm

    That's a different perspective I would be... At the end of the day, (re)birth is the beginning!

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  3. SGNovember 10, 2014 4:17 pm

    Nice haiku though the subject is debatable.

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    1. LocomenteNovember 10, 2014 4:27 pm

      Yes, it is very much debatable...
      And, the very mystery makes this more attractive!

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  4. payal agarwalNovember 10, 2014 6:20 pm

    Very well said! :)

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  5. anilkurup59November 10, 2014 8:45 pm

    Birth to death? well before? Where does the circular act begin? Where does it end? And sou- what is that?
    Apart from that, poetic license is unquestionable and you seem to have used it well.

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    1. LocomenteNovember 10, 2014 9:16 pm

      Aah!! These questions remain..
      Which makes me think...

      Thanks Anil :)

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  6. AnonymousNovember 11, 2014 1:08 am

    Profound and a Haiku that's full with the never ending cycle.

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  7. UnknownNovember 11, 2014 8:24 am

    A nice Haiku dwelling on a perpetual riddle!!

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  8. Amrit SinhaNovember 11, 2014 12:20 pm

    And the circle continues :-)

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  9. Judith WesterfieldNovember 12, 2014 6:55 am

    Perfect haiku for the perfection of our soul. My highest compliment: wish I had written it.

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