Saturday, 7 December 2013

Promised a Lifetime

Beside rivulet
You promised me a lifetime
But why you broke it?
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16 comments:

  1. SimranDecember 07, 2013 11:30 am

    Dear, I've tagged you Here
    Let me know your response :)

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  2. kaykualaDecember 09, 2013 8:39 pm

    Things sometimes cannot be explained! Nicely Locomente!

    Hank

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    1. LocomenteDecember 10, 2013 10:50 am

      Very true...
      And there will be many unanswered questions which we carry to the deathbed...
      Thanks Kaykuala :)

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  3. hyperCRYPTICalDecember 10, 2013 3:48 pm

    Sad when promises are broken Locomente - this sadly is a lesson we learn in life.
    Anna :o]

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  4. ReshmaDecember 11, 2013 6:21 am

    Broken promise always hurts.

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  5. ManiparnaDecember 11, 2013 2:20 pm

    Nice Haiku..simple lines impregnated with a deep meaning ..

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  6. AnonymousDecember 11, 2013 3:42 pm

    Aw! I was not expecting the sad ending! I guess, life is full of surprises!

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    1. LocomenteDecember 11, 2013 3:59 pm

      You may not believe...
      But I believe the same too...
      And such belief only accelerates fear and melancholy in life!!!

      Anyways...
      Thanks Eight feet tall :)

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  7. Jyotsna BhatiaDecember 11, 2013 5:55 pm

    Sadness of broken promises :( We were on similar page though.. one of my haiku speaks on similar lines.. Well attempted Satya :)

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    1. LocomenteDecember 12, 2013 9:00 am

      Thanks Jyotsna...
      I did notice the similarity :)

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  8. AnonymousDecember 12, 2013 1:36 am

    Nice poem.

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