Saturday 7 December 2013

Promised a Lifetime

Beside rivulet
You promised me a lifetime
But why you broke it?

16 comments:

  1. Dear, I've tagged you Here
    Let me know your response :)

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  2. Things sometimes cannot be explained! Nicely Locomente!

    Hank

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    1. Very true...
      And there will be many unanswered questions which we carry to the deathbed...
      Thanks Kaykuala :)

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  3. Sad when promises are broken Locomente - this sadly is a lesson we learn in life.
    Anna :o]

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  4. Broken promise always hurts.

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  5. Nice Haiku..simple lines impregnated with a deep meaning ..

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  6. Aw! I was not expecting the sad ending! I guess, life is full of surprises!

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    1. You may not believe...
      But I believe the same too...
      And such belief only accelerates fear and melancholy in life!!!

      Anyways...
      Thanks Eight feet tall :)

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  7. Sadness of broken promises :( We were on similar page though.. one of my haiku speaks on similar lines.. Well attempted Satya :)

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    1. Thanks Jyotsna...
      I did notice the similarity :)

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